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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
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Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-03-27 09:15 PM



     Sorry you haven't seen much of my work recently, I took an extra week for spring break.  But I'm back.


When You Turned Left

you turned left
I turned right
venturung forth
conquering new challanges
traveled our own seperater paths
that will never lead us back

you turned left
I turned right
to see where our lives would
take us
maybe we'll meet in the end
I doubt it,
but aagain?

when you left
I turned out right

© Copyright 2003 James Ian Craig - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-27 09:17 PM


Welcome back..hope you enjoyed your break.
Love this...two great closing lines as well!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-03-27 09:53 PM




Enjoyed the last two lines which I almost missed had Nancy not mentioned them. Creative!

Welcome back...

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-03-28 03:13 AM


James - hahahaha - this is awesome:

when you left
I turned out right

can relate - yes I can - awesome write xxoo

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-03-29 07:18 AM



A good play on words, rk...
well done!

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