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vandana
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0 posted 2003-03-27 05:30 PM


Yesterday
Yesterday has gone away
Now
Today has come to
FIll my heart
With love again
Wished It would rain
and when love was there
To fill my heart
Yesterday was there
you took my heart away
and make me reslise
How pericous was yesterday to me
I know
you are right person
to fill me in
and yesterday has become
a memory to me now
Today
now
Thinking of the times
we spend it together
Knowing
how pericous love was to me
Yesterday seems so fullfilled dreams
to shine my eyes away
Yesterday has gone now
and today Is here
yet to take my heart away


yesterday
all the dreams and memories
of my heart became a moment
in my life

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-27-2003 05:31 PM).]

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-03-27 07:01 PM


Clapping for a great write and an even greater read.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-27 07:05 PM


vandana - loved this - can relate much:

and yesterday has become
a memory to me now


xxoo

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-27 08:53 PM




(sigh) Yesterday will inevitably do this, sometimes the moments aren't pleasant, but when the colors seep in too, they will compromise! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-27 08:58 PM


Very nicely done vandana...much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-03-28 07:52 AM


Precious moments of yesterday ... they have a place in your heart and in eternity.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

EagleOne
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6 posted 2003-03-28 09:49 PM


Very well done!
Larry C
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7 posted 2003-03-28 10:15 PM


vandana,
==================
Yesterday has gone now
and today Is here
yet to take my heart away
==================

Well said and a lovely poem.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2003-03-28 11:09 PM


Hopefully our memories will sustain us and leave a smile behind to remember.

Enjoyed this vandana~

noah j
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9 posted 2003-03-28 11:11 PM


i thought this was very good.

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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