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Sikanda
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0 posted 2003-03-27 04:21 PM


"Love"

Love is like a rose
fragile,evermoving
everlasting,everproving
sleeping silently in its ease
petals moving gently in the breeze

Love is like a rainbow
so wonderful its undescribable
beautiful feelings undeniable
colors soft and imaginative
free to thrive, free to live
vibrant, stunning, a breathtaking sight
warm embrace, full of light

Love is like the sun
shining warmth streaming down
shining light all around
strength, happiness, peace
putting the heart to ease

Love is like the stars
twinkling in the night
silvery, shining light
bright to star-crossed eyes
of lovers hearts and lovers pride

Love is like the clouds
floating high above the earth
laughing in their mirth
changing, everchanging
in merriment arranging

Love is like the wind
gently caressing your hair
letting go of all your cares
or gray in its darkest hour
reveling in its power

Love is like a stormy day
quickly comes, quickly goes away
like a lightening strike it can tear in two
everything dear to you

Love is everything good and bad in this world
free to scorn, free to spurn
free to move from place to place
full of heartache or full of grace

Love well love is free
Free to be anything it wants to be

© Copyright 2003 Sikanda - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-27 08:26 PM


Sikanda!  This is amazing - you have touched upon every aspect of love - and yes it can be anything you want it to be indeed - xxoo
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2 posted 2003-03-27 08:36 PM




(sigh) But you can tell if the love is "real" by the faith and honesty that defines it! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, you have my gracious vote, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sikanda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-03-27 08:38 PM


Very beautiful...very book-worthy!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-03-28 11:37 AM


It's all this... well written! *S*
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5 posted 2003-03-28 11:41 AM


Yes, Sikanda,
love  is  all  this.
I am so happy to say that
I  know.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

ambrish
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6 posted 2003-03-29 03:05 AM


i agree with you
  
you have said it in a simple and assuring way
            float freely in love

Sikanda
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7 posted 2003-04-01 02:04 PM


*bump*
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8 posted 2003-04-02 07:32 PM


Sikanda you can not bump your own poetry in Passions but this is surely worth more reading.  That is the trouble with a big site, poems move so fast.  You caught "ideal" love in all its glory, and I wish everyone could feel it once.

     
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-04-02 08:00 PM


Some nice thoughts on love...James
Justbleu
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10 posted 2003-04-12 06:55 PM


This is nice....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


vandana
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11 posted 2003-04-12 06:57 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed it a lot
carol
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12 posted 2003-04-12 07:19 PM


very nice thoughts

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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