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edh
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0 posted 2003-03-27 12:28 PM



Oh brave new world does not thou know?
There among the winds did go.
A spectre who did in dark crusade
more than any great parade.

Oh hungry orb which spins the sun.
For all her children are undone.
No mercy would she show me.
For mercy which I gave.
Silent and slow who could
perceive came the lustless
quiet blow.

Oh fire sky not one dare say.
How tomorrow brought today.
Though many go on speaking still
of the lifetime they will fill.

Oh lone affair has brought the hand.
To hide the eyes of those
who stand - in the way or in
the path of paradise.....

and helpless wrath.

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-03-27 11:15 PM


This is the first of your submissions that I have seen... And now it's time to look for the others.
Very nicely done.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-03-29 07:42 AM


Oh fire sky not one dare say.
How tomorrow brought today.
Though many go on speaking still
of the lifetime they will fill.

~*~

I'm liking this one...read slowly, each line lends a quiet reflection...

but this stanza...this one is a

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-03-29 10:57 AM


Nice to see something reflective once on a while..click


Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-29 11:19 PM


Sunshine stole my favorite stanza . We can always shaare. Good write.

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carol
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5 posted 2003-04-12 10:22 PM


on vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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