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morefiah
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 150
Spanish Town, Jamaica

0 posted 2003-03-27 10:13 AM

If I could kiss you everywhere
and make your dreams come true,
then there is nought I would not dare,
and nought I would not do.

I would begin by kissing you
upon your pretty eyes,
and kisses on your earlobes too,
awakening butterflies

Inside your stomach,(and there I'd kiss)
your pulse would also race;
and I can also promise this:
I'd kiss your secret place.

And then I'd know that I had died
(In heaven I would be)
for my kisses, tho true and tried,
could ne'er do more for me

For oh, to kiss even your shade,
and make my dreams come true,
would see my life suitably made
nought more I'd need to do.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-03-27 10:21 AM

And then I'd know that I had died
(In heaven I would be)
for my kisses, tho true and tried,
could ne'er do more for me

For oh, to kiss even your shade,
and make my dreams come true,
would see my life suitably made
nought more I'd need to do.
===================================

Well this is a lovely poetic entrance...
welcome to poetry land morefiah, so nice to meet you...
your kiss of bliss is wonderful

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2003-03-27 10:22 AM

Welcome. A pleasant kiss & tell that I would imagine would be most appreciated by the recipient...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-03-27 10:26 AM

I like your kiss.....Wonderful!!!
Welcome to Passions!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-03-27 10:56 AM

Welcome to Passions, edh! This is a very, ah, warm first write - well worth a great THANKS FOR THIS!!! Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2003-03-27 10:59 AM

Hi,thank you for your nice note on my poem. Welcome to Passions. One can tell by this poem that it is the right place for you.
Sandra

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-03-27 11:02 AM

Welcome to Passions!---and from reading your passionate first post, you have come to the "write" place!--& lucky are we who get to read such mots of love!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-03-27 11:03 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Loved your warm first kiss..I mean post.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-03-27 11:35 AM

more - Welcome to PIP! Love this:

awakening butterflies

just lovely - nice job - you will love it here . . . xxoo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-03-27 12:07 PM

Welcome. A very beautiful and stirring kiss-poem!
Love, Margherita

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

10 posted 2003-03-27 12:09 PM

awww!
Its lovely, well rhymed and cleverly done.

well done its a beautiful and funny write

morefiah
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 150
Spanish Town, Jamaica

11 posted 2003-03-27 12:53 PM

Thanks to you all. I have been writing poetry all my life. Never really thought of sharing this most precious part of myself with so many before now. Glad I decided to. Thanks again for the warmth.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-03-28 01:49 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a lovely and passionate debut, sweet friend, and surely writing poetry your whole life you have so many more beautiful poems to share too which we all can't wait to read, hooray! Welcome to Passions, sweet Morefiah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Morefiah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

13 posted 2003-03-28 02:00 AM

Inspired poem!!! Wonderful passion racing through the pulse of its words. ***Ivy Rose

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-03-28 04:44 AM

Whole lots of kissin going on...James

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