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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-03-26 03:50 PM


                   I remember your embrace
                   like a fading memory
                   a picture in our crumbling
                   photo album

                   I'll never forget
                   your sweet lips
                   intoxicating as sweet wine
                   brushing against mine
                   on many a starlit night

                   How can I dare forget
                   a thousand night
                   ignited by our flames
                   of passion
                   which now grow cold

                   I dare not forget our love
                   for its memory
                   may soon be all I hold
                   in these trembling hands.

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (03-26-2003 03:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-26 04:38 PM


Great job... sometimes remembering is the best part.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-03-26 04:47 PM


thank you!
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3 posted 2003-03-26 04:58 PM


...out of the flames, poet!

Rf

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-03-26 05:57 PM


Excellent...James
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5 posted 2003-03-27 11:01 AM


Sometimes memories are best.

Enjoyed.


Sunkissed.

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-03-27 08:11 PM


Goodness Brad - I know this too well - awesome write - xxoo
Margherita
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7 posted 2003-03-28 08:09 AM


Beautiful ..... new lips may be waiting somewhere, anxious to create new memory for the future.
Love eternal!
Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-03-28 08:16 AM


Brad,
Well done, looks like your getting some good advice.

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