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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-03-26 12:26 PM


Silence can be Bold
That is the statement that you make
so strong it causes heartache
No answer to my questions
only empty sound and its getting louder and longer by the day

Where could you be to keep me waiting in doubt
what tasks are you laden with that might distract me from your thoughts?

Echoes resound building into a thunder my own voice bounces back
in the space left from our past
conversations that grow less in depth

Shhhhhh can your ears hear it
the void that crashes like surf
on the beach
silence can be bold
it is the unspoken answer
to my questions asked


Is this regular or Decaf?

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (03-26-2003 08:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-26 03:49 PM


Very cool piece
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2 posted 2003-03-26 05:17 PM


Sounds like Decaf... it always leaves me in pain..

strong write... and heartfelt


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