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Open Poetry #25

King of Self Delusion

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-03-26 10:31 AM

I am everything
And nothing
at all

I am the king of my castle
And will be there
When it crumbles
And falls

Even my delusion shaded world
Is more real to me
Then you

In my mind
I am but a god
Bestowing favor
On those I will

Traveling many miles
With blinders
Failing to see road signs
To my cold fate
I slip

Fall fast
And the bottom
I can not find
On this fast disappearing
Grand deluded isle
That was my mind.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-26 11:02 AM

Alright I was being silly

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (03-26-2003 11:35 AM).]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-03-26 11:27 AM

Okay, seriously the little mad face you used kind of scared me...almost as if you were demanding someone comment....

I, as usual, find your work fasinating and enjoy it very much. I like the contradictions...

Susan

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-26 11:36 AM

thank you

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-26 04:37 PM

Very nicely said.
Eric

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-26 11:17 PM

God - Brad - keep blowing my mind here . . .

Failing to see road signs
To my cold fate
I slip

know that one well . . . this is amazing truly xxoo

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