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Darkfire k'Sheyna
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since 2003-03-20
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0 posted 2003-03-25 10:21 PM



Unsatisfied
With my life
always longing
for something I can never have.
I look around at all the modern technology
at the human race, so proud
of their advancements
and all I want
Is to leap into the pages of my books,
into worlds of magic,
of valor and chivalry,
of swords, of kings,
honor and majesty...
Yet I cannot, except in my mind
Visit these places I long to go.
Unsatisfied
with my life, my time, my place
I bury myself in books
and dream away my contempt
for this world I find myself living in...
this world which leaves me
Unsatisfied.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
1 posted 2003-03-25 11:43 PM


God Jen - exactly the reason I have read my whole life practically and pretty much why most of us are here - this was amazing - you brought up so many points - I can well relate - kind of like just want to open your eyes and have a new life - thank you - liked this much xxoo
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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-03-26 12:07 PM


dream away my contempt
for this world I find myself living in...


Man, do I ever know this feeling. I think these types of dreams are the only thing keeping me sane (Ok, who's lauging??)

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-03-26 10:24 AM


Nicely penned!
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