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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-03-25 09:45 PM



Let me be your simple PLEASURE
allow this to occur
with but one word

YES

SAY IT BOLD
and alone
no other poetry

YES

just one word
and my mind will be at ease
for my heart already knows
what I seek

YES

If that is what you need
and that is the way it is
then it shall be
the PLEASURE of you and me

YES


© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-25 10:28 PM




(smiles) Yay! Yes, YES is the only way anything should be declared with certainty, maybe will never mean anything! (big hugggsssssss) May she always accept your invitations, dearest friend, I enjoy this immensely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-03-25 10:37 PM


Very nicely done Rogue. I would say yes, but I don't think this old lady is who you are speaking of.

Enjoyed the read of this, and it gets my vote.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-25 10:39 PM


Thomas, another good poem.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-03-25 10:51 PM


How could it be otherwise?
TD

Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2003-03-26 10:38 AM


My thanks to each one of you
your words and reflections mean so much to me not only in the comment section but in your own poems as well

Again thank you

Learninginlife
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6 posted 2003-03-26 12:10 PM


Wow
I enjoyed reading this write
keep it up mister

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-26 10:35 PM


...and it was a "PLEASURE" reading your words...

Peace & Light,
EA

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8 posted 2003-03-26 10:40 PM


Well done and much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

WhiteRose
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9 posted 2003-03-28 05:35 PM



carol
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10 posted 2003-04-11 11:41 PM


Thomas, very good I really liked it

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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