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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2003-03-25 09:33 PM



You know my Mommy Muys don't you?
The one that will be ninety two
Let me tell you a little tale
Guess what she wrote me in the mail

Still driving her own car you know
Hit the peddles with soft flow
Crossing country like she should
Driving speed more than I would

Car gets old and high on cost
Somewhere a few parts were lost
Did send me a mail right here
'I've just bought me a new one dear'

Tomorrow morn I'll drive her down
To this place, my working town
There all washed and shining bright
Stands her car, blood red, not white

Have to drive her back to me
She wants to practise first you see
In this wide open country here
One couldn't even hit a deer
(sorry Ball, didn't mean you)

So watch out for this Mom of mine
She will be driving around real fine
In a red car that does all tricks
My Mommy Muys will have her kicks


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2003 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-25 09:38 PM


Oh Titia!
You tell Mommy Muys..she rocks!
She is going to look so cool in that new red car!!
WoooHooo!! Tell her I said..."You go girl"

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2 posted 2003-03-25 09:46 PM




         

GO, MOMMY MUYS, GO!!
IN YOUR PRETTY RED CAR
TURN YOUR MUSIC ON THE RADIO
WHERE THEY CAN HEAR NEAR AND FAR!!

I love this, Titia. Give Mommy Muys a
hug for me and tell her to be real careful
driving in her new red car. Okay?

Heart Hugs to you both....   
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-03-25 09:57 PM




(giggles in delight) Yay!!! You rock girl! (kiss on cheek) Don't you go driving 55 now, hehehe, now give that thing a whirl and take it for a spin, hehehe, this is sooooooo cute, you two are soooooo groovy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
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4 posted 2003-03-25 10:24 PM


Oh wow! Tell mommy Muys to be careful in her new bright red car.
WhiteRose
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5 posted 2003-03-25 11:19 PM


Oh yes, do tell her for me, You Go Girl!
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2003-03-25 11:35 PM


LOL

I want a picture of her in her shiny red car! I love this Titia. Your mom is a firecracker!

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7 posted 2003-03-25 11:47 PM


LOL! We have a lot of Mommy Muys driving down here in Florida and the cars are red, too - from all the pedestrians they hit!

Tell Mummy to be careful, enjoy her new car, and don't hit any 'deer!!!

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8 posted 2003-03-25 11:52 PM


'Tomorrow morn I'll drive her down
To this place, my working town
There all washed and shining bright
Stands her car, blood red, not white'

LOL...Good for you Muys!  Got one myself!  Can I ask, what happened to the nice, safe little scooter?  

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9 posted 2003-03-26 06:53 AM



In red, we surely can't miss her!
Hugs to Mom Muys for her vivacity!

Margherita
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10 posted 2003-03-26 08:47 AM


Wow, this is amazing. Surely some Angels also like to race through town in RED with your dynamic Mommy Muys!
Love, Margherita

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11 posted 2003-03-26 11:34 AM


I love this, Titia... and Muys!!! *S*
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12 posted 2003-03-26 12:07 PM


I absolutely adore the two of you!

Love, Light & Joy,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-03-26 12:37 PM


Rock on Mommy Muys!!! Titia, this was delightful, and you are so lucky to have your Mom still with you and full of high spirits. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2003-03-26 12:50 PM


Titia, you give Muys a message from me that she is an inspiration to women everywhere.
Hooray Muys!!



Luvs, hugs and smiles, Marti


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15 posted 2003-03-26 12:51 PM


hehehehe...thanks for sharing this!
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16 posted 2003-03-26 03:10 PM


This is delightful! Good for Muys!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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17 posted 2003-03-26 03:22 PM


Cool...James
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18 posted 2003-03-26 06:35 PM


MommaMuys at the wheel .....~
Wowser~
Way to GO Muys !!!

Delightful, Titia~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Muys
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19 posted 2003-03-27 05:26 PM




Enchantress, I rock smoothly

Garysgirl, I've lots of guardian angels

Noah, they'll notice me now

Smartchick, I'll be real careful

WhiteRose, HE'S MINE!!!!

PoetdeVine, look at me

Balladeer, if they should give me a license, I would drive right up your doorway.

Duncan, I still have my scooter, but that's one for old ladies, wich I'm not of course

Sunshine, you'll see me coming alright

Margharita, it's an amazing car

Suthern, I love you too

Earth Angel, love and light for you too

Nightshade, I'm so happy

Marti, I got the message

Passing Shadows, you're welcome

Pilgrimage, thanks I'm delighted

James Michael, it's a cool car

Marge, wish I could drive to you to give you a hug and a knuffel

Muys

Life on the internet begins at...90!

Titia Geertman
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20 posted 2003-03-30 03:11 PM



Red delight for little mouse
At the age of ninety two
Mommy Muys you really rock
Did I tell you I love you too??

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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