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Gina Culliney
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0 posted 2003-03-25 09:19 PM



A Promise Worth Keeping


You Promised me there would come a time,
When I could reach out and the world would
be mine.

When others in my foosteps would want to
follow, come hail or highwater.

A part of me wants that day, and yes, a part of me
wants to keep fate at bay.

What makes words worth the saying?
Perhaps,its the price people are paying.

© Copyright 2003 Gina Culliney - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-03-25 09:21 PM


Welcome to Passions.
A beautiful entrance, expressive and strong.
Look into your own heart...you will know the day before anyone. ThisDiamond

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-03-25 09:21 PM


Gina - promises are worth keeping, or at least to try and keep them...

BC

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3 posted 2003-03-25 09:22 PM




(big hugggssssss) Sadly there are some people who are unfaithful and untrustworthy, but it is always worth giving love a chance and embrace the possibilities as there is truth in it too, this is a wonderful debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Gina, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, yay, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-25 09:23 PM



Much enjoyed your first post Gina!
I look forward to more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Jason Lyle
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5 posted 2003-03-25 09:32 PM


I will keep my promises, Milady.
Jason

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6 posted 2003-03-25 09:50 PM


Wonderful first post, indeed welcome to passions!  I hope you enjoy the friends and family here.   I hope to see more of your work.  

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

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7 posted 2003-03-25 09:57 PM


Gina, this is a beautiful first post
and I hope to see more of your work.
I hope that you enjoy it here among
this big family of friends, and



Heart Hugs,
Ethel....garysgirl

Gina Culliney
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8 posted 2003-03-25 10:48 PM


Thank you for the welcomes and honest words.
Its nice to know there are other writers out in the big world too.  Sometimes I feel like an island.  Noah, thank you for the card, also.
P.s.
I'm countin on it J.L.

Sunshine
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9 posted 2003-03-29 09:50 PM


Welcome to Passions, Gina.  You remind me of a friend from long ago.  I wish you well!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2003-03-29 11:53 PM


Welcome to the family. I like your poem. It's simple and to the point. You're going to make a GRAND member here!
Ivy Rose
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11 posted 2003-03-30 12:55 PM


Gina...Very impressive first post. Looking forward to more of your work. ***Ivy Rose
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-03-31 04:56 PM


Gina - Welcome to PIP!  

The world will be yours - is just a long hard path to that perfect peace  . . .
this is lovely   xxoo

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13 posted 2003-03-31 09:16 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!!

What makes words worth the saying?
Perhaps,its the price people are paying.

Great line. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Justbleu
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14 posted 2003-03-31 09:42 PM


Breaking promises that you wanted to keep is one of worst things you can ever do....I know!!!!

Welcome To Passions!!!!


Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Pascal
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15 posted 2003-03-31 09:44 PM


Excellent poem Gina. I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Take care.

Pascal

Believe in yourself and wonderous things will happen

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16 posted 2003-03-31 11:27 PM


It's a pleasure to read such a wonderful first post. Welcome Gina! I'm glad that you've chosen to join this board.
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17 posted 2003-04-01 04:47 AM


wonderful! Welcome to Passions!
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