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zenny
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0 posted 2003-03-25 01:28 PM


Passion
Pure flames of lust
Two bodies melt in one
Purifying at full delight
Loves' play


note: i'm playing a bit with poetry forms, is this a succeeded cinquain form?
Enjoy..
Hugs, kelly

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1 posted 2003-03-25 01:37 PM


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Zenny, you would enjoy the Poetry Workshop.  The link will take you to Nan's February "Cinquain" thread - which tells me you're fairly well on target!

Good job!

zenny
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2 posted 2003-03-25 01:40 PM


thx sunshine *me runs off to the workshop *
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3 posted 2003-03-25 03:30 PM


well done in this good attempt at this form
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