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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-03-25 12:56 PM




Mystic
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Mystic
Thoughts accorded
Surrounding gentle soul
Chant of recant from long ago
Rainbow Warriors fluting a lilting song
Dancing the victory long gone
Moccasin feet in prance
Gifted begin
Mystic~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-03-25 01:01 PM


awesome scene!
Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2003-03-25 01:04 PM


Hiya Marge!
You still ROCK!!!!
Jeff

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3 posted 2003-03-25 01:16 PM


...magical, mystical, enchantingly wondrous, writing...  

Peace, Love, & Light,
Linda

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-03-25 03:30 PM


NIcely done!
Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2003-03-25 03:49 PM


I enjoyed your words
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-03-25 06:37 PM


Good Evening Marge,
it's so nice to see you
back in your comfort zone.
hugss
M


pssst  did you ever take a picture of my Margie Doll? I forgot to and would love to have a remembrance of having made her for you

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-25-2003 06:38 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-03-25 06:40 PM


Margie girl...your words are pure magic!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-03-25 07:07 PM


Marge,
You are a charmer,

Corinne
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9 posted 2003-03-25 08:17 PM


Gentle and uplifting, dear Marge!

As always, great to read your words that remind the reader to stop and appreciate what lies outside and in!

Cor

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10 posted 2003-03-25 08:25 PM


Marge/sis...some things are just magical...I think many times you are.  
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11 posted 2003-03-25 08:51 PM


this brought such a vivid image to my mind, Marge.  You are truly a painter with a pen.  Thanks for sharing!

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2003-03-25 09:07 PM


Marge - you write magic with your pen...

BC

Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2003-03-25 09:16 PM


You write them rictameters so well, as everything else for that matter!

I skipped class again, too busy with too many thingies.

Titia

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14 posted 2003-03-25 10:52 PM


Beautiful, Marge!
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15 posted 2003-03-25 10:54 PM


Such rich beginnings...in the native legends, the soul of humanity.
Excellent as always. ThisDiamond

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16 posted 2003-03-25 10:56 PM


Absolutely breathtaking, Marge. You are such a talented writer of anything you decide to do. Just beautiful.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-03-26 11:18 AM


Yes! *S* Methinks Skyelara whispered inspiration for this one... Meknows I love it! *S*

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18 posted 2003-03-27 07:01 AM


BEAUTIFUL penned as always Marge

((hugs))
Charisma

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19 posted 2003-03-27 07:04 AM



Each line
paints the picture
perfectly...
and the chant shall
always fill the
wind...

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20 posted 2003-03-27 09:12 AM


Marge -  I can here the drums in the distance . . . a gypsy soul . . .  loved this  xxoo  
Sudhir Iyer
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21 posted 2003-03-27 10:05 AM


You are the diamond...

so much enjoyed...
regards,
sudhir

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2003-03-27 10:06 AM


Friends~
Thank you one and all for your kind appreciation of this little piece~

SuthernGal ... of course you would 'know' ..
and you're right on target !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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23 posted 2003-03-27 10:18 AM


Awesome Marge .... this is so good for my imagination!  Love it so much ...

Hugs for peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2003-03-30 12:43 PM


Thankee, MzMartiGal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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