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Say those words
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Say those words |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Smile for me and say the words I wait to hear let them slip pass your sweet lips The words of mercy that will free my heart enslaved by anticipation You alone hold the key to my cell and with little effort you can set me loose only to fall into your arms and be held I promise to surrender with tender ease I will give you all of me No questions asked only some simple words that will allow us to travel on a shared path So whisper or shout those words and free me from my prison and we will live in our own eternal heaven |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
~sigh~ beautiful! |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
Wow, this is very eloquent and lovely. *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Old fashioned romantic beauty |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Thomas. I enjoyed reading it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is a third alarm swooner. And definately brings a sigh to the lips. Very nicely done Rogue  |
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