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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-03-25 11:49 AM



My fear is revealed
standing out in the open for all to see
no questions asked of me
just fingers pointing and whispers spreading the cancerous seed
blooming and bearing false fruit of what really occurred

lies and deceit plague all who come near
fancy dancing of the tongue
spins a web that might never be undone
truth be told does not appear
only statements half said

Words clipped out from a comment
make for a different event
time waits for the facts
but the clock will keep ticking
for the one to clear any doubts is the one
who planted the seed
that grows so twisted between the truth and half-truths

That person is the one who feeds you the rotten fruit not me
I am the earth that had been sowed with what you taste
I am the one who must live with the disgrace


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-25 11:55 AM


ouch...

hard lines and tension...

well done.


passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-03-25 12:57 PM


painful...

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3 posted 2003-03-25 11:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) No one should ever have to live with these lies, dearest friend, this is powerfully said and I hope soon the truth sets you free, I send heart hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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4 posted 2003-04-22 11:06 PM


Very sad but great write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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