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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-03-25 10:30 AM


(Author's note:  I've learned, since posting this,  that rictameters are to have relatively independent but related thoughts in separate lines.  The present run on sentence is sort of the way I talk if you let me.  KJ)
Mornings
are beginnings
to tell us, if we will
listen, that today is all we
have and whatever is important to
us needs our attention this day
for someday we will not
have anymore
mornings.



[This message has been edited by kayjay (03-25-2003 12:05 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-25 10:40 AM


Beautifully written Ken with a very true message!
You are doing extremely well with these!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-03-25 10:42 AM


Words of note by a note-worthy "rictameterist"!

Love & Light,
Linda

kayjay
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3 posted 2003-03-25 11:58 AM


Dear friend E, you're good to me
And spread your praise so well.
Words you say will find their way
until my writings ring a bell.  Hugs..KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

kayjay
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4 posted 2003-03-25 12:01 PM


I'm glad to post and gather note
that offer you a smile
I always love that what I wrote
unburdens you a while.
Thanks so much, Linda..Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2003-03-25 03:36 PM


Nice!
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6 posted 2003-03-25 03:42 PM


Oooh, I have got to learn how to write these! Love this!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-03-25 06:52 PM


kayjay - you are so correct for another morning may not come, life is so short, and I'm glad that I finally woke up and started to enjoy it and not work myself to death. Nice write...

BC

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