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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To share To pass the symbols of a thought Depends upon your care and dwell The passage is of common wrought But must include a common gel. By gel I mean a common store A store that is of common meat Meat that needs be chewed no more But awes within the same heart beat. First the right felicity No high or low of tonal swell Second a light simplicity. Not beyond the common dwell. It must include a day and night Sun and entire shadows crest Balanced on a scale of right And fit a common heart at rest. It is the language of the meek And that is why I seldom speak. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
morning Sy... another good one from your pen. thanks for the morning read... I enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ! This is the angel side of me speaking with you this fine spring morning! The following lines intrigued me... "It is the language of the meek And that is why I seldom speak." I believe that you are a pussycat with the heart and voice of a lion---You are the proverbial iron fist in the velvet glove...  Have a glorious day, Dear One, EA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
G'Morning Sweet Sy... Folks don't know just how introspective you really are unless they've had the privilege of meeting you... This is wonderful - You really DO have lots to say...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Your words are so full of wisdom each and every day...amazing how you manage to do this. But, please don't ever stop. ~Tea & Morning Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In 2000 I pulled a poem The Golden Key, to print it has stayed close by my side I see many things in it... Now it seems that 2003 has slipped up on you and me but your writing is only deeper so I've printed me another keeper...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Earth Angel A pussycat by day, a lion by night The question is do I have that right. LOL  Nan, You give my secrets away, Nancy, Thank you my dear. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour,  I'm here earlier today, and it's good to see another word of wisdom from you. This one is a lesson for us, for sure. Do you mind if I keep it? Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy ~~ I have not been here mornings of late and am glad to have tea and wisdom with you this beautiful day. This for sure is being printed and kept in my poetry book ... hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - and "share" you have. Words so wonderful and wise - thankyou for this. toast with honey hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Another Seymour classic. Thank you much for your thoughts and pointers. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Today your sunshine has given me a blush instead of a tan. Ethel, Yu do me honor, Marti, You too do me honor, Chris, Toast with honey and hugs, yummy, yummy, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, I thank you much. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sy, this was excellent. I read this a few times to fully grasp your words, and I love the comparisons you drew. As a result, I do believe I will chew on my words a bit more before speaking ... as each phrase that one utters should indeed be well thought out and worthing of sharing. Best wishes and hugs to you /Kit |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
seymour, you always succeed in pulling my eyes to your words, which ever amaze me. once again, this is a wonderfull write i really liked Hugs, kelly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, My dear this is something you already knew. BUT Desire rides a fancy horse On a very chancy course. kelly, Cool, thank you so much. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know this sounds a bit like an E.F.Hutton commercial. *G* But when you do speak, we listen. *S* Meat that needs be chewed no more But awes within the same heart beat. Could there be a better way to describe the words you share with us? *G* I think not... this is excellent! *S* |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
You excel in your abilities to write and I hope to one day be able to accomplish what you seem to do with ease Thomas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you for the excellent, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thomas, Thank you and I'm sure you will. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Seldom speak...surely not when you're with us every fine morning! LOL! But you always share such wonderful sentiments with us anyhow and that is what makes this family! (big hugggsssssss) This is a lovely read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you so much. Noah, Thank you for the lovely read. |
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