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Masters of War |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Masters of War Masters of war,saviours proclaimed… Civilians and soldiers pawns in your game… Visions of tomorrow,blinding today. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
~sigh~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...who are dellusionaly believing they are masters of the universe... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
I have translated the poem into Chinese here. If you agree, I will post it to some web sites in Chinese, such as: http://www.toppoem.com/list.asp?boardid=15 http://www.likk.com/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=34 http://www.poemlife.com.cn/forum/list.jsp?forumID=6 http://www.liufangdi.com/index_2.asp http://www2.bbsland.com/cgi-bin/tea.cgi Thank you for your poem. Õ½Õù´óʦ Õ½Õù´óʦ, Ðû¸æµÄ¾ÈÐÇ¡ ƽÃñºÍսʿµäµ±ÔÚÄãµÄÓÎÏ·ÖÐ Ã÷ÌìµÄÊÓ¾õ, ½ñÌìʧÃ÷¡£ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Inspired by Bob Dylan's bitter indictment? Cool. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That's powerful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
bbent this is quite good with a powerful punch. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
thanks all for taking the time to read and reply...was thinking haiku then realized i'd confused words with syllables after i'd posted it but figured it still said what i wanted to say so left it as is. Goldboat feel free to use it if you choose. Live like it's your last day... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well said! Paul |
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