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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Gather the dark around stars the night is spilling and all the wishes are waiting to climb across the sky with hope to join the pattern formed by others far to see and how explain if words cannot stars will gather [This message has been edited by Martie (03-24-2003 10:23 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lifting my own to join... Thanks Martie. TD |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Gather the dark around stars the night is spilling and all the wishes are waiting --------------------------------- to see and how explain if words cannot moon will gather --------------------------------- I got news for ya groovy poet girlie... your words ALWAYS explain it poetically.  and could this poem be any cooler??? me thinks not  "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
In the words of an aging boomer, "you rock girl!" btw, liked the poem muchly. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Diamonds in a maiden's handbasket...lovely! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Martie! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yes! A lovely write dear poet. But then, I've come to expect nothing less from you.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nice job here Martie - gave me a smile JUST when I needed it xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful Martie!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Martie, This is wonderful. So creative! I like, especially: "Stars the night is spilling. And all the wishes are waiting" Plus, it is a rictameter...very good. Enjoyed, hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ethereal.....this is like the sound of dreams coming true. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Martie.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Wonderful...and beautiful....I miss you. Great work as always. H. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This isn't rictameter This is pure MARTI! Even the stars can't sting themselves into phrases like you do. Your words make them more beautiful And they just fall into place Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Marti-Meter .... it's just soooooooo lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
again..well done and the short form...the actual format of the words adding to the pleasure I took from this read. You do this well.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Lovely is as lovely does. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel like I cannot find any other words to say how I feel about your writings, other than "beautiful" and that doesn't begin to cover it. |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
This is so beautiful...Can't wait to read more! *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
pure Martie, Liz had it right M |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Uplifting, Martie and a cool design, too! Cor |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - you write with a style of, well, of, I just can't think of the word, but it means superfridgatilic... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) The stars can always explain what the words alone cannot, that is His philosophy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, always believe on that star you gaze upon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks friends for these wonderful replies to this bit-o-rictameter. [This message has been edited by Martie (03-25-2003 10:47 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
" the stars the night is spilling" Love that phrase!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - your writing is amazing - you are a special person and a wonderful poet - Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and all the wishes are waiting At least one of mine is that you never stop writing. *S* Beautiful!!! |
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