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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-24 05:02 PM



The bird longs for
the air -
And this propels its flight.

I long for your
touch -

And this propels my heart.



© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-24 05:06 PM


Oh geez...

there you go,
getting all romantical on us again...

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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2 posted 2003-03-24 05:09 PM


Ericc ~

This would melt the heart of any ice maiden!
Oh, yes! Indeed it would!  

Peace & Love,
EA

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3 posted 2003-03-24 05:10 PM


*SIGH* you are on a sweet roll
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-03-24 05:31 PM


Ready to take flight upon the emotion of these beautiful words!
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-03-24 06:41 PM




(sigh) Oh Eric, I think that love truly is the wind beneath ones wings, every fledgling just needs a pair of hands to lift one up for love to take flight! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-24 07:04 PM


very nice.. tender..romantic and to the point...

I enjoyed..

Rapscallion
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7 posted 2003-03-24 07:32 PM


Wow. I may have to borrow that at some point. Why is there no smilie for ‘lecherous grin’?
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8 posted 2003-03-24 08:50 PM


Eric, you've such a way with words.

well done.

Sunkissed.

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9 posted 2003-03-24 10:31 PM


Sweetness in few words!
Blowing to your winged heart.
Love,
Etain.

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