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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-24 02:27 PM



When I wake up in the morning
And I see you there beside me
I know the feelings we share are true
I know you'll stay forever near
For those times when I feel so low
It's not a game of truth or dare
Our love depends on you

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-24 02:49 PM


Surely then it's a great love that can endure without damage some "lows".
.... but remember she might feel low at times and then your love depends on YOU.
Lovely.
Margherita

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-24 03:35 PM


Ringo, I was feeling the same thing that
Margherita said. I imagine that your lady
depends on your love sometimes, too.

Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-24 04:49 PM


Exactly...love should be mutual...neither should have the attitude that they want to see how much they can get away with and still have the other person love them...of course problems will arise and thats why communication is so important and acceptance and forgiveness...James
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