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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-03-24 02:14 PM

What thoughts sweet muse
as through some magic portal pass
unrestrained to you?

Roses blooming
betray breathless secrets
imagery scented dreamscapes budding
in alabaster soaked dew?

Tender fingers
dying to unfold mysteries thin buried
beyond drench of morning light
shadowed figures, writhing?

Dying moon
kiss silken sheets that sweetly
trace contours of pleasure
untold beyond these walls?

Now, fingers stained ink black
parchment piled about my feet
some empty, some half full
devouring hours
till quill inspiration's sweet revenge.

Do these thoughts pass undetected?

Rf

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-03-24 02:43 PM

Your muse seems to capture all your thoughts ....
Beautiful write!
Love, Margherita

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-03-24 02:57 PM

Robert

Such longing beauty in your words...I think you may have seduced your muse with them. Much enjoyed!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-03-24 03:30 PM

devouring hours
till quill inspiration's sweet revenge.
***
wish I'd written those lines

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-24 03:36 PM

A vision of Nostradamus came to mind...burning the midnight oil...unfinished quatrains on crumpled paper about his feet...

Thoroughly enjoyed your poem---and all the images that were brought to mind.

Peace & Light,
EA

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-03-24 04:53 PM

I think not poet...I think not.
Bravo! ThisDiamond

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

6 posted 2003-03-24 05:17 PM

All, a huge, flattered thanks!

Rf

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-03-25 07:41 AM

nicely done Robert...and not lost on those who dropped in I see. You weave this well and your muse it would seem sits on your shoulder with a smile.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-03-26 04:50 PM

Ah, I've uncovered a treasure...
You have a certain panache
of writing "old world"
that I enjoy very much...

thank you Robert...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2003-03-26 07:02 PM

Robert, this is simply wonderful.
Sandra

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

10 posted 2003-03-26 07:57 PM

Okay, I definately *swooned*

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2003-03-26 10:19 PM

Robert - well written, sweet to read of thoughts...

BC

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