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0 posted 2003-03-24 10:50 AM


******
As you come in the door, you see me
sleeping on the couch, waiting for you
I awaken as you reach over to kiss me
wondering if this is a dream, or really true

Then I open my eyes and looking
into your eyes, I know that it is true
For I can see deep into them all your love
shining brilliantly through

I see love like I've never seen before
shining clearly through the eyes of you
Knowing that as you look deep into my eyes
you see my love shining back at you, too

As our love is all aglow, we know
this is not a dream, but passionately true
Who could ever doubt, with love such as ours
you for me, me for you, true love between us two
******

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-24 10:55 AM


this is a beautiful write, garysgirl, about a love everyone searches for

Enjoyed reading it

hugs, kelly

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2 posted 2003-03-24 10:56 AM


Oh, the joy you must have felt when you realized that it was not a dream......(tho' dream he may be!)

Peace & Love to you both,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-03-24 11:13 AM


*sigh*....I miss that.... :-)
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4 posted 2003-03-24 11:44 AM


The simple miracles in our lives...  may they be contagious...

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5 posted 2003-03-24 11:46 AM


good one garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-24 01:08 PM


you always make me smile and believe
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7 posted 2003-03-24 03:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I am so happy that this is not just a dream and I wish for this happiness to always sing in your soul! (kiss on cheek) I keep praying I can have love close to my heart soon too, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-03-24 04:57 PM


Simply beautiful.
Eric

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9 posted 2003-03-24 05:14 PM


Beautiful words, beautiful presentation.
Love glows through your poetry.

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10 posted 2003-03-24 05:24 PM


Does Miami Beach kinda pale in shimmering when your heart lights up for this man?  This is a loving tribute, Ethel, and says as much about you as it does about him.  Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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11 posted 2003-03-24 05:29 PM


How wonderful to have this certainty. You share it beautifully!
Love, Margherita

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12 posted 2003-03-24 11:11 PM


Awwww... SO sweet! I love this one

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13 posted 2003-03-24 11:18 PM


Ethel - I must say that when I read you - you carry me to a place I long for - A place I dream of in this deep dark night - your words console me throughout this arduous journey of mine and I thank you
xxoo

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14 posted 2003-03-24 11:20 PM


Ethel--I'm happy that you have such love!
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15 posted 2003-03-24 11:38 PM


Kelly,
I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for replying.  
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Linda,
oh yes, he sure is a dream....
my dreamboat....
.
.
Kristie Sue,
I'm sorry it made you lonesome.....
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Mark,
yes, may they be contagious.
Thank you for reading & replying.  
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.
I appreciate you all.
Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-03-24 11:43 PM


Bernie,
hi, friend. It's good to see
you here. Thank you for replying.
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Dixie,
I'm glad that I make you
smile and believe.  
.
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Noah,
you will find your Love one day,friend.
Thank you for your sweet words.  
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Eric,
thank you for liking my poem.
I appreciate it....
.
Heart Hugs to all of you,  
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-03-24 11:47 PM


Kacy,
thank you for your nice comments.
I really appreciate them.  
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Ken,
Yeah, our hearts light up every
time we think of each other.
Thank you for the sweet words.  
.
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Margherita,
Thank you so much.
Yes, it's wonderful for us to
be sure of each other's love.  
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Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-03-24 11:53 PM


Tara,
Thank you very much.
I'm glad that you liked it.
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Sue,
Thank you, little friend, for
those sweet words. I'm really
glad that my words make you feel better.  
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Martie,
Thank you very much, sweet friend.
I appreciate you so much.  
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Heart Hugs to each of you,  
Ethel

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