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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-03-24 09:54 AM



Many Traits Combined

Of written expressions
What do we portray
Without conversation
Do emotions convey

If by reading emotions
Without seeing eyes
What could you see
Do words dramatise

Onto scraps of paper
Emotions word paint
Colouring ones mood
Do feelings correlate

To reveal and expose
Many traits combined
Can my words explain
Do you read my mind

A collection of verses
Written collage of me
My emotions in words
Do you relate with me

HopeĀ©2003

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-03-24 09:57 AM


HopeS
You have lots of relations, LOL Wonderful write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-03-24 10:00 AM


I most certainly do relate with you! I identified completely!

Peace & Light,
EA

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-24 10:05 AM


Yes, Hope.....
I relate, too. I loved this poem.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-03-24 01:10 PM


I always love your poetry!
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