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El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-03-24 08:59 AM

It has been a while since I have posted a poem here. Tell me what you think of this one.

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I see a little star
That’s shining in the night
If only I could reach
That little point of light!

The wise men chased a star
It brought them to a town—
They found the greatest gift
From heaven had come down!

And if you’d like to see
Your greatest dreams come true,
You must first set out on
The path set before you.

This is what I have learned:
If you want to reach a star,
You must follow the twinkle
That seems so very far.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-03-24 09:03 AM

Yes, set your goals high and reach for that star...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-24 09:07 AM

Well done...much enjoyed the read.
Good to see you back here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-03-24 11:52 AM

Tell you what I think??
I think you need to post here more often...
This is very nicely written, and the message is quite clear without being too "preachy".. great write

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-24 01:01 PM

oh yes...this is wonderful!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-03-24 02:11 PM

This is so sweet!! Such a light and fluffy refreshment!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-03-24 02:19 PM

You walk graciously on the Path lit by this sparkling star!
I love it.
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-03-24 06:31 PM

Enjoyed...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-03-24 06:37 PM

This is really beautiful. I think you need
to post here more often, too.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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