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pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
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California coast

0 posted 2003-03-23 03:13 PM



Words come easier
When absence grows nearer
No certainty
No promises
Only the present is now
Our beds have been shared
With strangers
But especially you
How can I explain?
I can't give proof of anything
More than this physical match
We stumble in this interminable night
Perchance encounter joy
"Soon" you hope
But I know there are a thousand lives to live
Afraid to say "wait"
Don't question my will
It will happen when wrong
Becomes right
When then
Becomes now
And if the passion fades
I'll remember.

© Copyright 2003 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-03-23 03:22 PM


Welcome to Passions, Sarah!  I do believe
you're going to enjoy yourself among our
blue pages!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-23 03:28 PM




(big hugggssssss) I think you have grasped on exactly when you can be sure of something, dearest friend, the past should never co-exist with the now and I hope you find the spark in such a moment! This is a heartfelt debut, dearest friend, you will fit right in with this wonderful poetic family, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Sarah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, ooohhhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-03-23 03:46 PM


Welcome to Passions, Sarah. Your first post underscores one of the sad dimensions of Love.

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-03-23 04:47 PM


Very nice post, welcome to the forums.Looking forward to reading more.
Jason

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-03-23 04:51 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I'll look for more of your work soon.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
6 posted 2003-03-23 09:11 PM


Really enjoyed this first post of yours, very nice and I happily voted on it.
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
7 posted 2003-03-24 03:05 PM


Very nicely done.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-03-24 03:09 PM


Welcome to Passions! A supportive home of kindred spirits who are passionate about poetry! Enjoyed your first post!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-03-24 03:09 PM


This is an excellent first post, Pearl.
I can tell you'll like it here. I hope to
see more of your work. And...



Hugs,
Ethel....garysgirl

bsquirrel
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10 posted 2003-03-27 12:32 PM


I like how you weave truth into a delicate, and yet hard, poetry.
Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
11 posted 2003-03-27 03:24 PM




good write ready for more
Thomas

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