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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-03-23 01:45 PM




Trust



Behold
Life forces on
We hear news then we weep
We feel beauty crying in us
Searching for right, knowing wrong, ying and yang
Miracles fly into our lives
Trusting mayhem will end
Forcing life on
Behold

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-23-2003 02:33 PM).]

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-03-23 01:47 PM


I can only say....thank you for this.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-03-23 01:49 PM


I believe Miracles do happen *s
trust...a very important word.

hugsss
M

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3 posted 2003-03-23 01:51 PM


Another beautiful ray of spring sunshine!
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4 posted 2003-03-23 02:10 PM


Such a wonderful message in such tight writing.  Great word selection.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2003-03-23 02:11 PM


PS  The gold on blue color scheme is tough on these old eyes.  But the work was worth it...*S*  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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6 posted 2003-03-23 02:11 PM


So many blessings...wrapped in miracles.
TD

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7 posted 2003-03-23 02:27 PM




Karilea, a
BEAUTIFUL
rictameter. You know
that I love it!!

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-03-23 02:29 PM


Thank you for this, Karilea...it was needed.  
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9 posted 2003-03-23 02:30 PM


Beautiful Karilea!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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10 posted 2003-03-23 02:36 PM


This one is for the BOOK~

  
Sharon

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11 posted 2003-03-23 02:54 PM


Mine eyes have seen the coming of a color I can see, Your words are marching on!!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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12 posted 2003-03-23 04:42 PM


LOL@KayJay!
This is beautiful Karilea...
Much enjoyed...love the pic too.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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13 posted 2003-04-02 12:10 PM


Forcing life on

wow, indeed we must do that, even when we feel not quite ready or unable to do so...this gave me a sense of urgency, that we must unleash our hidden strength NOW!

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14 posted 2003-04-02 03:13 PM


just sitting in silence, thinking
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15 posted 2003-04-02 03:37 PM


Behold, the words of Sun!--They shine yet again!

Love & Light,
Linda

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16 posted 2003-04-02 07:21 PM


enjoyed this much
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17 posted 2003-04-02 07:31 PM


Karilea, Spring is on the horizon and with it comes miracles. And Lord only knows, we need some.

You said a mouthful with this piece. I loved it.

Hugs for peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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18 posted 2003-04-03 07:02 AM


Ericc..I can only thank you for that...

Yes, Maureen...they do...in several ways, and even ones we don't think to ask for....

Hey Duncan, don't you owe us a poem or two?

Kayjay - tight writing...ah, good.  Don't want any loose and sloppy ends!  Thank you!

TD - so many, indeed!  Thanks!

Ethel - you're enjoying Rictameters too much - we've got to teach you something new!

Martie - I hope so.  I know I did...thank you my friend...

Thank you Chris!  

No Mysteria - not for the book - I have my two in the book - that's all I need, until I do my own...and I will, because you haven't removed your foot from my backside yet, and it's not easy, sitting!  Hugs you!

Enchantress, isn't it fun reading the comments to all the threads?  Hugs you!

You know, kaile, it is always interesting to see which line pleased someone the most - I'm glad you shared that with me.  Thank you!

Passing Shadows - thinking is a good thing...and if this made do that...then I appreciate your letting me know...thank you!

AH Linda, you always make me smile with your responses...thank you!

Thank you vandana - always enjoy seeing you pop in....

Miracles come all the time, Marti...but with spring, they smell good, too...   Thank you, my friend....

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