navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » Misguided love
Open Poetry #25
Post A Reply Post New Topic Misguided love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Vellgred
New Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 2


0 posted 2003-03-23 10:35 AM



                 (Misguided love)

The love I have for you is stronger then the wind.
Though you say it’s untrue, my heart aches when I’m near you.
Knowing you will forgive is a blessing to ones ears,
Although why should you.
They say time is constant and a healer of the soul,
Then why must we be apart? When two hearts are like one.
I was a fool blinded by your beauty and kindness,
Mistaken by your friendship for love.
I plead and beg with the thoughts in my head,
If given the chance for romance I’d rather be dead.



© Copyright 2003 Vellgred - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-03-23 10:50 AM



Welcome to Passions!  A powerful first write, no misguided reply here...Please!  Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

SimplyGold
Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2003-03-23 10:55 AM


Welcome to Passions. A very nice submission.
I look forward to reading more.
SG

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

3 posted 2003-03-23 12:07 PM


Nice write, sad the tone
M@C

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-03-23 12:18 PM


A very powerful first post. And



I hope you like it here. It's
a very good place to be, with lots
of wonderful and compassionate people.

Heart Hugs,  
Ethel....garysgirl

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
5 posted 2003-03-23 12:27 PM


Welcome to the land where all aspects of Love are poetically expressed.  
looking forward to more from you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-03-23 12:41 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your powerful first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
7 posted 2003-03-23 02:36 PM





Enjoyed your first post!!

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
8 posted 2003-03-23 02:48 PM




(big huggggssssssssss) I too don't understand why we are all left misguided either, dearest friend, this is a very powerful debut that expresses honesty of emotion, God Bless You, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Vellgred, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vellgred, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Vellgred
New Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 2

9 posted 2003-03-23 04:59 PM


I just wanted to thank everyone for the kind words.
Its great to get other peoples views and opinions on things I write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
10 posted 2003-03-23 07:46 PM


Welcome to Passions...
I do believe you belong here!

ThisDiamond

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #25 » Misguided love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary