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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert

0 posted 2003-03-15 07:55 PM


GENTLE AWAKENING

You creep out of bed  
So as not to wake me,
But your leaving
Stirs me, to awareness.
The pillow that cradled
Your head remains indented.
I reach out to touch
The place that you vacated
Between the sheets,
The warmth of your body
Radiates them still.
A sleepy, contented smile
Of remembrance
Lights up my face,
The very thought of you,
And your touch
Blissfully transports me
Into a fantasy world.
I feel childishly wicked
And womanly wise,
I am well and truly loved.

The sound of you
In the shower,
Brings me back
To the brink of waking.
I wish I could
Arouse myself enough
To join you
Beneath the stream
Of warm water,
Yet I can't.
I seem unable
To completely escape
The enveloping  cloud of sleep.
I hear the shower door open,
I visualize the bath towel
Being held in your
Competent hands.
I see you briskly
Drying yourself,
You’re skin glowing  
From the roughness
Of the towel.
I am aware of you
Brushing your teeth,
Or is that somewhere
In the background
Of my fantasy?

How wonderful
It was last night.
My mind is wandering,
And I gently caress myself
In recollection.
Suddenly,
Without my knowing,
You are back in the room,
The space in the bed
Is occupied once again.
My breasts and legs
Tingle in anticipation,
Our lips meet
And you fulfill,
Once again,
All my fantasies.


I be me BUT who does me be?

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-15 07:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, all your beautiful words make me smile as I dream of making my girl feel special like this in the future and always being near and making her feel loved! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, you have my loving vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-03-15 08:03 PM


Very sensual indeed. And very nicely done.
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-15 08:35 PM


I remember this one from the forums and it is very hot, Lady. I like it very much.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-03-15 09:51 PM


Very nice Spirit, you managed to make me blush, and I think I'll wake up the wife.
my vote, milady
Jason

aries_luv_ppl
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5 posted 2003-03-15 10:00 PM


lovely write

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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6 posted 2003-03-16 04:20 AM


I think we all need tatoos with this on...
I feel childishly wicked
And womanly wise.
Cute, and yet another side of SPIRIT

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
7 posted 2003-03-16 10:47 AM


Thank you, all comments appreciated.
Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
8 posted 2003-03-17 11:54 AM


I want to wake up like this - maybe one day. Nice write and I voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Tammy Blessing
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9 posted 2003-03-17 12:17 PM


Oh this is just wonderful!!!

"I feel childishly wicked
And womanly wise,
I am well and truly loved"

Big !! Glad to vote for it.
Tammy

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-03-17 12:47 PM


It appears as though you had a wonderful start to your day!

Delightfully titillating!

Warm hugs,
EA

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11 posted 2003-03-17 01:58 PM


add my vote for this great piece.  Joyce
dhicks03
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Missouri,USA
12 posted 2003-03-17 05:08 PM


Wow, simply exsquisite!! Vote cast.
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