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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
RECOLLECTIONS I have committed to memory Your touch, Your body and mine, Fused together In an unbreakable bond. This precious closeness, Is retained In the recesses of my mind. How thankful I am, For the ability To remember you so clearly. You remain indelible on my heart, How sweet the words, Murmured, In the throes of passion. I recall every one, And the remembering Causes exquisite pain. There have been other lovers Since you, Undoubtedly, There will be more, In my unending search For a love to replace, That which I had with you. If you had left me for another I could have hated you, And possibly been free. Instead you were taken in death, Leaving so many things Unsaid and undone. Our relationship Is like a book, Half written By a discouraged writer Who can see no end in sight. But how grateful, Truly grateful I am For the presence of you, In my life, If only for a short, But memorable time. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Das, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, though this does happen to so many, I hope this isn't related to you and that your story continues to be written! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just beautiful Spirit!! A hug and a vote! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very beautiful.  Dawn |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well saide, Spirit. Joyce |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, even though sad. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
great write |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely in all it's sadness. It gets my vote.  |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thank you, this one is a truth but over thirty years ago. He still owns a part of me. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wrote a poem only the other day of who who still holds part of me, and this hit a nerve, but I enjoyed your story. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Our relationship Is like a book, Half written By a discouraged writer Who can see no end in sight. Spirit, was taken in by the title and the above lovely lines |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Very beautiful! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I am enjoying reading what you write because I understand it easily. This is great. Voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! Gotta lump in my throat... Warm hugs, EA |
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