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Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-22 01:26 AM

I think I may be falling,
Im standing at the brink
of a cliff whos journey down
would afford lots of time to think

I think i may be falling, yet not in a bad way
atually, ive been falling, since that very first day

I looked at you and took a dive, from which theres no return,
there are only two options, suceed, or crash and burn

I know now that im falling, deep in love with you
Maybe youll catch me at the bottom,
if not, ill still love you.

© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-03-22 12:49 PM

Diving in head first isn't all bad...it's the chance we take.
I hope the one you write of will be there for you.

Nice poem~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-22 12:52 PM

Rd - mannn - I know this one:

I think i may be falling, yet not in a bad way
atually, ive been falling, since that very first day

nice job xxoo

Jaime

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Posts 250

3 posted 2003-03-22 01:09 PM

It would be unwise to be too comfortable anyway. It's good to take a chance.

And love certainly is one..

Good poem. I like how it feels honest.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-03-22 01:55 PM

I enjoyed your risk taking, great bravery.
Is there any other way to be truly alive?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-03-22 03:35 PM

Now that was precious, pure, and poetic...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-03-25 09:19 AM

Simply wonderful.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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