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Sinzofthesic New Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 5 |
Shatter... Endless remorse Screams Walls become the source Sounds... as my heart Hits the ground Im outa place im out of this place I feel disgraced Misplaced When I go, there will be no trace No place left to go Im out of control [Edited by Moderator] up Lost emotions Silence when I speak your name Silence when I feel the flame I burst into fire I can't control your desire Dead hung on a wire My portrait is shown for the world Violent spasms A room full of has-beens And never was Never looked for the thoughts Just fought for it Scream and get taught for it I long for it long for you Long for what can be if I ever lost you Resentful demented hesitant I am a resident in you In your thoughts Your feelings Your energy Taunted tattered teased Broken battered displeased Diseased..... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-21-2003 08:52 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...I hope tomorrow is a better day! Whew, this one sounds like the pits! Peace, Peace, & more Peace... Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sin - this one flows like water - I love it - sad sad but amazing writing - caught me at every line - just running . . . xxoo |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I haven't seen your first post, yet, however if it is as good as this, I will be lokoing forward to every one yiou chose to grace us with. You haev my vote. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sinzofthesic Tomorrow is another day, enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I have been there too, dearest friend, where the wood is so dry I feel hallow and roaches and termites always seem to eat away my consciousness! (sad sigh) I send heart hugs your way, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I was thinking exactly what littlewing said! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
 Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very good description of someone having a rougher than rough time. Hope the next days are gentler to you heart, body and mind. Welcome to Pips! |
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