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Laurenel
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since 2003-03-12
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Georgia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-20 07:52 PM




My life used to be dull and bleak
I went through the day unseeing
I lost all sense of who I was
Until I met you

I forgot how to love life
I forgot to enjoy myself
I ignored my friends
Until I met you

You breathed light into me
You showed me how to love
You are my love, my all
I owe it all to you

I glimpse the colors of the world
I hear all the unheard songs
I’m wrapped in the comfort of your love
I owe it all to you

I sing to the stars at night
I dance to the light of the moon
I feel joy once more in my life
You are my sunlight

You warmed my frozen soul
You thawed my icy heart
Because of you, I feel again
I love you with my all

I love the glint in your eyes
I love the air you breathe
I love your laugh and sigh
I love everything about you


© Copyright 2003 Lisa Evert - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-03-20 09:21 PM


I love the glint in your eyes
I love the air you breathe
I love your laugh and sigh
I love everything about you

Isn't it wonderful to be so much in love.

majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
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2 posted 2003-04-01 08:15 PM


"I love the glint in your eye"

that line really made the poem for me.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-04-02 11:18 AM


it's great that you've found someones to make bounce around with joy
I can see you smiling in this poem

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-04-02 11:42 AM


Lisa - good for you!  This gave me a smile today :

I feel joy once more in my life
You are my sunlight

very nice xxoo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-04-02 11:44 AM


Something seems to tell me that you are in love with Jimmy! Delightful!

Love & Light,
EA

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