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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-03-20 02:21 PM

                        Beyond old grapevines
                        the last maple leaf dangles
                        Lonesome rainy day

                               032003

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-03-20 03:22 PM

beautifully done...I could picture this in my mind..

believe in what your heart feels...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-03-20 03:30 PM

Very nicely done

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2003-03-20 04:44 PM

Beautiful!!

Charisma

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-03-20 04:46 PM

Perfect. Simply perfect.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

machiner
Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 67
MA, US

5 posted 2003-03-20 04:48 PM

Thanks for that.

machiner
Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 67
MA, US

6 posted 2003-03-20 04:50 PM

edited to delete double post

[This message has been edited by machiner (03-20-2003 04:51 PM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-20 04:54 PM

This is perfect, Sir.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-03-20 04:55 PM

rain waters bare trees,
shedding winters final tears,
spring comes tomorrow

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-20 06:34 PM

A Vivid view in your haiku!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-03-20 06:41 PM

Lovely...enjoyed this one!
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-03-20 08:23 PM

I saw it! I felt it!...I loved it!

Peace & Light,
EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

12 posted 2003-03-20 08:31 PM

I love this, too! I tend to be a hanger-on myself.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2003-03-20 09:02 PM

Krawdad...could see this too...lovely!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2003-03-20 09:48 PM

Ahhh, to smell the wind that gently blows the last of a perfect autumn...
So large the little picture that you paint.
Smiles from ThisDiamond

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2003-03-20 09:54 PM

Always a pleasure to see your posts

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