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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-03-20 11:59 AM

The morning rain
Filled my heart
With love
And each rose
I looked upon
Turns Into
Morning rain
showers that turned Into
The rose that burns
Into a pressing page
A rose of a morning dew
A songs of you and me
The songs we sing
The things we do
Whenever you go
Each petal of a rose
falls Into a ground
I try to keep
each petal of a rose
Into a book
Pressing Into a each page
Each rose that
In a spring TIme
Becomes Into a memory
Within my soul
I feel the rain shower
On my mInd
somewhere In my heart
I find a page
Tearing like Into pieces
Each rose
That reminds me
And turns Into a misty morning
In a morning dew
filled with a rain showers
On a rose
Each rose

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-20 12:00 PM

Your poems do reach out
like a rose...
each and every time...

Thank you Vandana...
this is lovely!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-03-20 12:09 PM

A perfectly lovely write. I really enjoyed the feel of this poem. Very nicely done.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-03-20 12:12 PM

Some things don't ever change that much.
Like roses that bloom again in the spring.

Nice vandana

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2003-03-20 03:05 PM

Very, very nice. Enjoyed reading it.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-03-21 04:49 AM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-03-21 06:52 PM

Beautiful .... soft as the petals of the rose ...
Love, Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-22 08:17 PM

(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is lovely, sweet friend, each rose petal has a beautiful memory all to itself and may each page in your hearts book be dappled with these fond remembrances! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I much enjoy this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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