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Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-03-19 08:45 PM



lines of black
streaming from my heart
death and decay
is all thats offered
thoughts of you run through my head
the moment you walked away,
my life grew dark,
and I was dead to everyone..
you laughed!
your twisted little laugh,
that draws men like money
never aware of the deadly mind,
or the blackened heart that awaits


-lance
dont hope for much.. life tends to screw u in the end

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-03-19 09:11 PM


Wow lance, this is really powerful. An excellent write!

And another

Welcome to Passions

I think you'll like it here.

Starsfalling
Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
2 posted 2003-03-19 09:17 PM


wee.. yeah i do like it.. its not to bad... all i gota do is get back to being known again so ppl will respond
thanks rose
-lance

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