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P.R.C
Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-03-19 06:43 PM


Where are you when I cry myself to sleep every night?
Where are you when I need to hold you tight?
Even though you dont feel the same
My feelings for you remain
I dont understand what went wrong
Why do I feel like this?
What happened to happiness, to bliss?
I started again, I dont want to blame you
Its not your fault, its mine
I deserve this
For being who I am
If I ended everything
Would it stop the pain
Or would it hurt others more
From my death, would i gain?
Or would it be like now?
Just the same
The same amount of sadness and tears
The same amount of pain
How can I make it all stop?
How can I make it all go away?
I hate how I'm feeling
I really don't want to hurt you,
Would you even care
If I was no longer there


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-19 06:56 PM


Hannah - know this feeling all too well - very nice write here but no - you would just have to start this confusing thing we call life all over again - which personally no matter how bad I feel - I am NOT doing this again - no sir . . . nice job xxoo  
WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2003-03-19 09:21 PM


Hannah, unfortunately, too many of us know this feeling all to well. Enjoyed the write of this.
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