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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-19 03:58 PM


On dreams fence
overlooking an edge
that covers me warm
encloses me in clouds
that pass at eye level
there is blue beyond the visible soft
and stone at my feet
balancing my pleasures
rescue the lost hazy sunsets
fix them to my distance
arrange them in futures gallery
don't let me only see them
asleep.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-19 04:01 PM


Wonderful! This is very beautiful.
Eric

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-03-19 06:22 PM


gemma - and may your dreams become reality - as always - beautiful xxoo
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2003-03-19 06:26 PM


A beautiful write.
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