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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-03-19 09:06 AM


I pause my journey,
When beside the road I see,
A shadow person,
The living with spirit gone,
She struggles to go
Not wanting others to know
She walks in nowhere
Always in the sad of there,
Eyes are glazed over
I could be just another,
But I call by name
And it reaches in her brain,
Stirring memories
Returns her realities
And she sees her fears
Washing the haze with her tears
And runs from my sight
To shadows and coming night
To pump her veins dimming sight.

Gloom


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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-03-19 09:09 AM


Hi Gloomy

It's so nice to read you again dear friend. This is pure gloom. You write of this so well.

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 368

2 posted 2003-03-19 01:25 PM


sometimes you should try looking through the shadows..who knows what might have been found

~A~

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
3 posted 2003-03-19 01:41 PM


makes us feel good by comparison
we could easily be there
a-shrouded

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