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Rdz9
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0 posted 2003-03-18 11:33 PM


I write this for a friend i am unable to tell this to, if you read it, you will know who you are.

As we walk along the sands of time, the waves washing at our feet
Looking into the calm blue skies, reflections we will meet
the world around us in the waves swirling ‘round our feet

time passes as we walk, as we talk,
of all things said and done and all things still to do
I walk the warm sands of time with all, yet just with you

you’re the only one I see, the only one I need
the only one I can be with, you’re the one for me
why is it only you can satisfy my need

for love, for friendship, for everything in life
never once have you made me angry, never was there strife
we seem perfect for each other soul mates for life

So as we stroll along these eternal sands I just have one question for you
forever will I love you, but will you love me to?


© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-18 11:42 PM


I don't know what person this was written for, but I do know one thing about them.

They are very lucky.

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littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-19 01:31 AM


RD - yes - I agree with Rat - what a heart you have - they are blind if they dont see xxoo
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-03-19 04:10 AM


just beautiful...very touching
Little_One
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4 posted 2003-03-19 03:42 PM


Robbie,

I think it is awsome.... you are such a great writer I hope that one day that special someone will finally realize that you have such a big heart

Kristin

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5 posted 2003-03-19 03:49 PM


I love this poem.....

When I read other peoples poetry I realize we in this world are not so different from one another!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Silver_Tryst
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6 posted 2003-03-19 03:49 PM


And I Rdz hope they will come to realize the wounderful person that is standing right in fornt of them

Shayne

Rdz9
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7 posted 2003-03-19 07:34 PM


Thank you all for your compliments and encouragement... it means a lot to me.
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