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What's A Teardrop To Do?

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Marge Tindal
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What’s A Teardrop To Do?
~*Marge Tindal*~

What’s a teardrop to do
but
.......f
............a
..................l
......................l
overwhelmed by it all ?

This saline notion, brimming with emotion
of memories in recall~

On a lash it may linger
sometimes caressed by a finger
of regret that came to be~
Slips to a soft cheek, beyond words of speak
then in a streak …
it silently falls~

This tear of emote … spills a heart-in-break~
What’s a teardrop to do … but fall ?



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 03-18-2003 04:15 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Interesting...I am always amazed when the teardrops fall...because sometimes they won't respond...James
Titia Geertman
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Dear magic Marge, this is beautiful.
My teardrops are falling now...I miss my little Chipmunk.

Thanks, I love you dearly lady.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

INclan
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3 posted 03-18-2003 06:33 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Thank you for your insight, Marge. For whatever reason the teardrop exists....to fall is indeed its destiny.

INclan
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4 posted 03-18-2003 06:33 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Beautiful Marge, in word and picture.
the_loner_23
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5 posted 03-18-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Beautiful words written by a smart lady. I really enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 03-18-2003 06:39 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

So beautiful, as well as
the presentation.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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7 posted 03-18-2003 07:05 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

The perfect poem for all of us who are crying over the loss of our beloved Lyra...

Superbly done, Marge.

Warm hugs,
Linda
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Excellent Marge..they are falling for me right now.
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9 posted 03-18-2003 07:21 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Beautiful words only you could compose, with a picture to match. Thank God we still have her poetry to keep us company.
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Marge - I loved this!  yes - only to fall hopefully to be quickly wiped away . . .  xxoo nice job
Martie
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Marge/sis...beautifully expressed, as only you can...
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Very impressive to see the different graphic applications come into play with this piece.  It makes for a complete sensory experience, the beautiful words notwithstanding.  "A saline notion"  That is vivid choice of words.  Sadly touching lines.
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Marge...
your heart is showing....
and holding....
love.

Thank you for this....
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This is beautiful, Marge! That's all they can do is fall. Just like mine are doing, now. Lyra was one of my dearest friends. We talked on the phone many times. And, oh how my heart hurts, now.
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Marge~ Thanks for sharing.

It is when we recall
A friend too us all
A teardrop will fall
We come together one and all.....

I bid you Farewell Lyra...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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HUGSSS you
Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

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17 posted 03-18-2003 10:41 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

This is quite beautiful.
Quite, quite beautiful.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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Marge~
Your teardrops just spoke to mine, and called them out.
Hugs to you, friend...lots of 'em.
You KNOW I love you,
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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What, indeed, Marge? Nicely said...
Charisma
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20 posted 03-19-2003 01:13 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

your words translated many hearts, thank you for sharing this one Marge.

(((hugs)))
Charisma
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Marge,
What indeed, except fall and be shared.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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... ~beautiful ...

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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23 posted 03-19-2003 07:59 AM       View Profile for Muys   Email Muys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Muys

My tearsdrups fall down for my dear friend Lady Chipmunk {Lyra}She is gone.
Thank you Marge for the beuatiful poem.
We all will missing her.
                                        

[This message has been edited by Muys (03-19-2003 08:05 AM).]

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Beautiful Marge...
Indeed...what is a teardrop to do..
She will be missed.
~Heart hugs~
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