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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-03-18 12:06 PM

                   Half drunk
                   demonic midgets
                   do haunt my hollow mind

                   Insanity is but another vise
                   I choose to hide
                   my dark secrets
                   I forgot in my closet

                   Whimiscally dancing naked
                   humming" enter sandman"
                   while painting pink smileys
                   on my knees

                   Then the impulse takes me
                   on the phone
                   calling sex operators
                   to tell them
                   they made you go blind

                   Bed time comes
                   nurse betty
                   smiles comes over
                   and sticks me with
                   a needle
                   feeling a little woozy
                   I fall to sleep

                   to dream
                   oh what a dream
                   of alien hermaphadites
                   with little tiny feet!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-18 01:29 PM

Dan - always amazing me with your words and lol - the first verse - (I have a fear of clowns sooo . . .)  loved this:

  Insanity is but another vise
  I choose to hide
  my dark secrets
  I forgot in my closet

Awesome xxoo

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-03-18 01:42 PM

thank you

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-03-18 02:45 PM

Wow. Disjointed, surreal, and naked. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-18 03:31 PM

Demonic midgets are the worse kind!
Excellent writng.
Eric

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-03-18 05:00 PM

can i have some of what your having?

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-03-18 05:11 PM

what insomina and an unique taste in movies?

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2003-03-18 09:20 PM

Half drunk
demonic midgets
do haunt my hollow mind

This so much reminds me of the movie called "Freaks". I think clowns are really rather macabre looking actually. Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

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