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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-03-18 11:03 AM


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~*~
True Love
Between us two
You for me, me for you
We have a love that is so true
Our love makes us happy and seldom blue
The kind we thought would never see
Dreams to reality
Forever be
True Love
~*~

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[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-18-2003 09:39 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-18 11:04 AM


Very pretty piece!
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2 posted 2003-03-18 11:52 AM


Awwww...and true love is what you are an expert in and a writer thereof!

Have a marvellous day!
Linda

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3 posted 2003-03-18 12:07 PM


very beautiful write garysgirl
You described, the feelings i share with my love.. so well

Lotsa hugs, kelly

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4 posted 2003-03-18 12:07 PM


very beautiful write garysgirl
You described, the feelings i share with my love.. so well

Lotsa hugs, kelly

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5 posted 2003-03-18 12:15 PM


No one speaks of love and it's existence in your heart as eloquently as you.  Fine write.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-03-18 12:17 PM


This belongs embroidered on a fine, lacy fabric. Savored forever. Smiles from ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-03-18 12:19 PM


this just makes me want to say awwwwwwww so sweet! You're learning forms and styles well, better than me for sure!
I commend you, Great job.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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8 posted 2003-03-18 12:27 PM


Ethel - as always - lovely:

Dreams to reality
Forever be

forever be  . . .  xxoo

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9 posted 2003-03-18 12:36 PM






(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes because I want to love a girl so badly like this and make her feel special forever! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-03-18 09:42 PM


Brad, thank you. I'm glad
you liked it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-03-18 09:43 PM


Thank you, Linda. You
say the nicest things.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-03-18 09:44 PM


Kelly, thank you very much.
I'm glad that you liked it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-03-18 09:45 PM


Thank you, Ken! That
was so nice of you to say.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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14 posted 2003-03-18 09:46 PM


AAAWWW Kathleen...what
a sweet reply. Thank you.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-03-18 10:00 PM


Alyssa, thank you very much.
I appreciate your comments.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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16 posted 2003-03-18 10:01 PM


Thank you, Sue. You're
real sweet.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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17 posted 2003-03-18 10:02 PM


Noah, thank you for always
leaving such sweet replies.
I love that picture, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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