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Surek
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0 posted 2003-03-18 10:29 AM



              (Denial)

I stare into her eyes, so full of love and understanding.
Waiting, wondering, longing for her touch.
Each moment that passes my heart aches knowing,
I will never get the chance to know her.
I spy her in the hallway She coyly smiles and waves.
The laughter the teasing its all there.
Full of hopes and dreams of what might be.
For I know are love will never exist.
She holds eyes for another.
My heart aches knowing where this will lead.
My sadness begins yet again.


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-18 11:10 AM


denial is a common thing. We refuse to believe what we are certain to be true. very well done!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-18 11:23 AM


Longing can be so bittersweet...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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3 posted 2003-03-18 11:42 AM




I like this a great deal. BUT, you just never know how that path of life might twist suddenly and all your dreams come true.

It is hard to keep hope and move on at the same time. But, we must. Cause you just ~never know~....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-18 11:51 AM


Surek - dont give up so easily - denial is a second self and sometimes just sometimes we catch that wave - nice job xxoo
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