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sellout007
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0 posted 2003-03-18 01:02 AM


~ "Boooooo" ~

Falling...
          in love.

Longing...
          for your touch.

Floating...
          out of reality.

Crashing...
          down to earth.

Reality...
          hitting hard.

Broken...
          is my heart.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

© Copyright 2003 Daniel Kelly - All Rights Reserved
sellout007
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1 posted 2003-03-18 01:04 AM


Couldnt think of a title, so i just inserted what i felt when i read it now...O)

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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2 posted 2003-03-18 01:51 AM


that's the way love goes...that's the way love goes
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3 posted 2003-03-18 02:07 AM


This is an interesting poem.
I like it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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