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Rdz9
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0 posted 2003-03-17 10:59 PM


For some of us our path is clear
the window bright, the future so near,

the window of life so clean to the eye
like staring into the midsummer sky,

watching souls play in the ocean of life
most without anger, dispair or strife.

The window has to cloud sometimes, of course
everyone who rides, once falls off their horse.

It chips and dents when we hurt and lie
making us, our very souls, to cry

without the window life is worth little
so fragile it is, so simple, so brittle

It can be broken, as a promise
but when it goes, like a friend you will miss.

You may never be able to see it again
yet i hope you will some day, my friend.

© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
Silver_Tryst
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1 posted 2003-03-17 11:13 PM


it painted some great pictures, I love it

Shayne

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-03-18 03:58 AM


wonderful! just wonderful!
Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-03-20 08:01 AM


This is beautiful and sad.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-20 08:45 AM


You are quite an observer of life!--and that is one of the qualities required to make someone into a great writer...keep observing and writing!  

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-03-20 08:57 AM


Rdz9, I like the way you write.
It feels like it comes straight
from your heart, and I like that.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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