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Surek
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0 posted 2003-03-17 02:30 PM


These are the feelings I am left with
As I sit here watching the morning dew.
The darkness surrounds me
A cold breeze sweeps across my face.
My one true obsession has been denied.
I sit here and mourn the loss of things that should,
Have been.
For I have been forsaken to travel this life alone.
I weep for those who shall travel down the same path
For I know it is not because of want or desire,
But for reasons that others cannot see.
The pain is very real, that I cannot deny.
It’s in my thoughts day and night, why must I
Feel so alone.



© Copyright 2003 Surek - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-17 02:39 PM



Welcome to Passions, Surek.  I hope you find this to be a very worthy poetic home, one that you won't mind returning to, again, and again....

    Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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2 posted 2003-03-17 02:41 PM

















(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartwrenching debut, sweet Surek, time and time again we may find ourselves taking a detour from the road we wish to be upon, and I truly believe it helps to rest and placate to oneself, but don't spend too much time feeling sorry or you may lose that next opportunity, so hold those sweet memories at heart as fuel and let yourself move on as much true happiness is waiting for you! This is poignant, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Surek, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Surek, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chanson
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3 posted 2003-03-17 02:44 PM


Surek, welcome to Passions!
I believe you will find that
you will not feel so alone
when you get comfortable with
the many, many beautiful
people here. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-03-17 03:44 PM


welcome to passions! Great piece!
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-17 03:56 PM


Surek - Welcome to PIP!  Well now - your not alone anymore now are you?  Nice job here xxoo
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-17 03:57 PM


Surek, I really enjoyed your first post.
It was written very well, though really sad.
I hope you find a place here with this  big
"family of friends" at PIP. And....




Welcome,
Ethel....garysgirl

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-17 04:11 PM


Welcome to Passions! You now have a new home away from home and you need not ever feel "Alone Again"!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

1slick_lady
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8 posted 2003-03-17 04:31 PM


welcome to passions...helen
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