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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Noah~ I REALLY like this a LOT.  You've penned a masterpiece here and have done a great job of presenting it as well. This is definitely one of my favorites of yours. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Noah dear....I think I would like to see a book just with your poetry in it.....WOW!!!!!!!!! You can really sweep a girl away with your words dear boy..... I gotta vote for this one too.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, you never fail to amaze me with your talent!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Noah...your vocabulary alone is light years ahead of me. Quite the presentation here. Kudos for all the artistic efforts. Well done poet sir!! oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This gest my vote. The poem is a wonderful combination of both poetic style and imagery formed with words. I believe this is the first time I've read a piece of yours. I'll be sure to try to follow your *career* here at Passions with your unique poetic style. "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a superb piece, Noah. You've made the words dance across the page and mind with twists and angles ... all the while staying true to the theme of your write. Just excellent! Really enjoyed this!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Noah...this is fantastic! Love the presentation as well. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is really, really good. I love the way you wrote it with the lines likeyou did. Definitely have my vote, friend......  Hugs, Ethel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is beautifully written; and masterfully designed... your creativity stands out so well... regards, sudhir |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great presentation in this Noah. An uplifting and sincere write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WONDROUSLY FANTASTICAL! A very enjoyable ride! Noah, this is absolutely brilliant! Huge angel hugs for this one, dear friend! Linda |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so awesome. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Thank you everyone, you are such special friends to my heart! I felt this would really work in Reflections as we are all like acrobats; we have to trust each other and in trust there is success and grace, and so we all really reflect these qualities, no matter who you are! So hang on and enjoy the ride! Yay! Thank you all! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Noah, This poem is great. Dawn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love it! You have my vote Noah. Maree |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, your words are always such a delight. Another vote from me my friend. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
BRAVO  BRAVO young one WONDERFUL You always out do yourself!! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW, Noah..this is a stupendous poem!! I felt like I was there...watching her courage transform in glorious abandon! You are a masterful poet! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a wondrous portrayal, complete with wonderfully thought out graphics. You have an inimitable style in your writes. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A wonderful presentation. Joyce |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Noah, have you dabbled with concrete poetry before? me thinks that you will excel... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW What a Masterpiece you present us........way to go Dear Noah Charisma |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Noah! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I really enjoyed this piece, especailly the last few lines. I love the visual aspect of it as well. Wonderfully done! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Noah, W. O. W. ! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, you have a mind that astonishes me every time I read something you have written. This is an incredible piece and presented so magnificently. Huggles sweetie, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Noah...this gets a vote just for all the work you put into it |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey, Noah, you devil you, this is pretty good. You definitely have a great flair for adding more than just words to your works. I enjoyed this very much. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I think the phrase "poetry in motion" best describes this poem. (Big Smiles) Not only is your poem artistic but your poem is also very entertaining to read. As I read your poem, I started feeling a sense of mental freedom and a kind of light heartedness. I think it is most wonderful when readers can experience a poem rather than just read a poem and this definitely is a poem that one can indulge themselves in the experience of it all. Excellent job here. I greatly enjoyed it. -Bob |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Standing ovation here! For presentation, content, subject poetic verse, originality, imagination AND TALENT!!! Noah, you are amazing. This is SUPERB Sorry I can only vote once lIz |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is just beautiful! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your words took me to the front row of the circus and I was mesmerized throughout the whole performance. I believe a standing ovation is in order here! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
 WOW! WOW! WOW! I'm dumbstruck, almost |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Oh Noah, Sweetie, this is just wonderful with the twisting and turning, I got such a great imagine in my head. I love it!!!! I love it!!! Love, Ladycat Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE ITSELF. --Havelock Ellis Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow, Noah! This is fantastic. Another vote for me. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-26-2003 08:23 PM).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nicely done, Noah...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem and presentation! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - now how did I miss this one? BC |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This one made me feel as if I was the one falling. LOL You have my vote, Noah |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
oops, forgot to vote  LOL |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
let you body rise softly to the limelight..... inspirational!! Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Noah, this is fantastic, both in thought and form!!! Bravo, lil brother!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A great acrobatic poetic performance! You are effervescent and transmit joy of life! Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Again, Noah, you have a special poem. Presentation is great, too. Sandra |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I must say, I enjoyed this... alot Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This is really impressive. The impact of your words is incredible. |
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Stanley Climbfall Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 16 |
Young man, your work astounds me, in my days I don't remember ever seeing words sidewind like that and have me hanging like an acrobat in the circus! Much enjoyed this performance! Stanley Climbfall |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
EXCELLENT! The entire package Noah. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Another great poem. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
WOW !!!! That was awesome!!!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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