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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-03-17 07:20 AM



Only The Wounded Weep

I shall check tomorrow
There was nothing today
So off to bed I descend
With feelings of dismay

Laying there in solitude
I Kept asking myself why
The feeling of rejection
It was then I began to cry

Weeping all my sorrow
Another sleepless night
My head into the pillow
I await the morning light

In downhearted despair
Heart questions persist
Wonder would you care
Would I ever be missed

The heartfelt penetrated
Only the wounded weep
I cannot remove my love
Feelings went too deep

HopeĀ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-03-17 10:32 AM




Hope,

This is heart touching. It is difficult letting go those we love so deeply, who don't return such.

Feelings of rejection do hurt. In any kind of relationship.

You captured well, sad emotions.

I'm unsure whether a poet is writing a current personal experience. In either case,

Heart hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2003-03-17 10:38 AM


Thank you Pat , dismay was yesterday , I am feeling more cheerful today
Hope

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
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3 posted 2003-03-17 01:25 PM


This really touched me.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

jellybeans
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4 posted 2003-03-17 01:32 PM


ah....coming from another 'wounded'...this touches deeply.....I feel your weeping
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2003-03-18 11:23 PM


A very touching write. I'm hoping all is well with you now.
the_loner_23
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6 posted 2003-03-18 11:28 PM


This touched me so much I am speechless.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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